Machines effectively manage to replace a whole bunch of people and though it increases production marginally it fails to reproduce the human touch. Also as technology advances people begin to take their home comforts for granted and society becomes harsher with the bulk of students opting for the IT channels, leading to unemployment in other fields. Furthermore, the unskilled workers that have been removed from their jobs must be retrained and reemployed. But if the government failed to provide for their training, since in requires a lot of money, time and effort, they will become a burden on the society.
Looking at the glass half-full instead of looking at it half-empty, technology is indeed a huge help to the society today and probably in the future. Replacement of the labor with modern technology has made higher income not only to the companies that use it but also the country’s economy as far as the stock market is concerned.
Moreover, machines or equipment that ended their life span do not need to be retrained or reemployed, but they can be recycled and resold for more profit.
Based on the results, the researchers had proven that using technological advancements may be a serious threat for the employment of the people.
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Machines effectively manage (1) to replace a whole bunch (2) of people and though it increases production marginally it fails to reproduce the human touch. Also (3) as technology advances people begin to take their home comforts for granted and society becomes harsher with the bulk of students opting for the IT channels, leading to unemployment in other fields. Furthermore, the unskilled workers that have been removed from their jobs must be retrained (4) and reemployed. But (5) if the government failed (6) to provide for their training, since in requires a lot of money, time and effort, they will become a burden on the society.
Looking at the glass half-full instead of looking at it (7) half-empty, technology is indeed a huge help to the society today and probably in the future. Replacement of the labor with modern technology has made (8) higher income not only to the companies that use it but also the country’s economy as far as the stock market is concerned.
Moreover, machines or equipment that (9) ended their life span do not need to be retrained or reemployed, but they can be recycled and resold for more profit.
Based on the results, the (10) researchers had proven that using technological advancements may be a serious threat for the employment of the people.
1) You should not use the word ‘manage’ as to do so would imply that machines have concious knowledge of replacing people.
2) ‘a whole bunch’ is generally used informally in conversation; and not in the conclusion of a piece of work. Try these sentences: “In the workplace, the replacement of manual workers by machinery has become much more prevalent in recent years. Although it marginally increases production, it can take away the qualities of human craft.”
3) I don’t like to see sentences starting with the word ‘also’… that may just be a personal thing though!
4) Use ‘re-trained’ and ‘re-employed’. This emphasises the fact that they are being trained again; the hyphen makes all the difference!
5) Don’t start a sentence with ‘but’
6) Try the sentence: ‘If the government were to fail in training provisions due to the cost of money, time, and effort, the unemployed workers could become a burden to society.’
7) ‘Looking at the glass half-full rather than half-empty…’
‘….has made a higher income; not only to…’
9) ‘Moreover, machines or equipment that become unusable do not need to be re-trained or re-employed, but instead can be recycled and resold to boost profits.
10) ‘…researchers have proven that using technological advances may pose a serious threat to employment rates.’
Not only do machines replace a whole lot of work force effectively, they also increase the level of production marginally, while ignoring the human touch issue.
As the society moves on with greater technology advancement, there will be substantial demand for pro-IT students. This will result in an imbalance state in terms of university or college course enrollment when more people opt for IT based courses.
Additionally, the existing work force which are less prone to IT based knowledge tend to be placed on the disadvantage side of the scale, with the worst case scenario of ending up retrenched. Trainings and subsequent followup tutorials should be conducted for these workers prior to reemployment. For those who failed to be retrained or reemployed, there would be a high possibility for these people to end up as burden for the society, which subsequently leads to increase in the local community crime rates. The consequential costs of failure to be reemployed would be difficult to be quantified.
Machines, on the other hand, will not be involved in the retraining or reemployment cycle which human work force face as an obsolete machine can be disposed off or remodified, depending on the users’ needs.
All these statements point to the fact that technology advancement is indeed necessary and it shall eventually turn out to be a global trend for every country to invest substantially in technology advancement. Nevertheless, it should be bore in mind that technology advancement will still, to some extent, threaten us in terms of employment of work force.